Friday, June 4, 2021

whales

 I can see killer whales, water and mountains. I can hear the whales and the splash’s of them. I can smell the fresh air and taste the salt water. It looks so nice but looks so cold that no one can swim. However, it is so weird to see what the whales are doing. It looks like they are trying to save baby whales.


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  1. Ka pai Tawhiri, good work on sharing your descriptive writing. I like how you have used your senses to describe the scene. I wonder what other adjectives you could add?

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