I can see killer whales, water and mountains. I can hear the whales and the splash’s of them. I can smell the fresh air and taste the salt water. It looks so nice but looks so cold that no one can swim. However, it is so weird to see what the whales are doing. It looks like they are trying to save baby whales.
I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka pai Tawhiri, good work on sharing your descriptive writing. I like how you have used your senses to describe the scene. I wonder what other adjectives you could add?
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