I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Tawhiri, thank you for sharing your poems! I like how you used a limerick and an acrostic poem to describe yourself. Your limerick had some great rhymes. Well done! I wonder what other adjectives you could come up with to describe sport?
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Kia ora Tawhiri, thank you for sharing your poems! I like how you used a limerick and an acrostic poem to describe yourself. Your limerick had some great rhymes. Well done! I wonder what other adjectives you could come up with to describe sport?
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