I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Tawhiri, thank you for sharing your review of Wolf Brothers. It takes courage to create a video recording sharing your ideas, with more practice your confidence and clarity will continue to grow. I like how you summarised the story and gave your opinion.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Tawhiri, thank you for sharing your review of Wolf Brothers. It takes courage to create a video recording sharing your ideas, with more practice your confidence and clarity will continue to grow. I like how you summarised the story and gave your opinion.
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